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WOW!! I was truly blown away. I always write detailed notes of criticism & applause, but in this case I only vaguely noted a few grammatical errors. If you don't mind me asking, what age range are you? I can't see a teenager not only experiencing these feelings physically, but viscerally as well. Your writing surpes most of what I've seen on here. I wish I wrote this well. Bravo!